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review Obsessions 103 Eate a new business But someone in Alpha City doesn’t want them to succeed Like a bad itch mysterious happenings haunt the newcomers and the town’s Alpha Can they figure out the mystery before tragedy happens Or will Ryder and London’s own chemistry cause them to miss the obvious I received this book in exchange for an honest review LoP or Lovers of Paranormal35 StarsI so desperately wanted to love this book and rate it higher but unfortunately I couldn t I will start with the negatives and end with the positivesThe whole book felt like a first draft not a finished piece At times the use of grammar and tenses was simply awful which meant that the novel didn t flow as easily as it should Want and Won t seemed to have been mixed up throughout In my opinion this is an easily fixable problem however it obviously wasn t picked up on editingThere were some seriously cheesy cringing moments he was perfection on a stickone she wanted to lick I am all for a bit of cheese but at times I found it too much The whole novel was rushed in my opinion The plot could have been better developed and allowed pages to breath and come into its own The bare bones of the story were fascinating and I would have enjoyed it had Evans delved deeper Despite this the story itself was intriguing and very gripping I loved the relationship between London and Ryder despite finding it infuriating at times I just couldn t put it down because I needed to know what would happen with them and Alpha City I would like to read the rest of the series at some point however due to the negatives I have mentioned I won t be picking them up just yet I would recommend reading this book because of the great story line and well developed characters However I would like to see an edited version in the future The Non-Designer's Design Book (4th Edition) received this book in exchange for an honest Homewrecker review LoP or Lovers of Paranormal35 StarsI so desperately wanted to love this book and Make your own model forts & castles rate it higher but unfortunately I couldn t I will start with the negatives and end with the positivesThe whole book felt like a first draft not a finished piece At times the use of grammar and tenses was simply awful which meant that the novel didn t flow as easily as it should Want and Won t seemed to have been mixed up throughout In my opinion this is an easily fixable problem however it obviously wasn t picked up on editingThere were some seriously cheesy cringing moments he was perfection on a stickone she wanted to lick I am all for a bit of cheese but at times I found it too much The whole novel was Tremors of Fury (The Days of Ash and Fury rushed in my opinion The plot could have been better developed and allowed pages to breath and come into its own The bare bones of the story were fascinating and I would have enjoyed it had Evans delved deeper Despite this the story itself was intriguing and very gripping I loved the How Julian and Nigel Turned Each Other Gay (Inadvertently), or So They Both Claim relationship between London and Ryder despite finding it infuriating at times I just couldn t put it down because I needed to know what would happen with them and Alpha City I would like to The Mage (Foxcraft, Book 3) read the Illustrated Workbook for Self-Therapy for Your Inner Critic rest of the series at some point however due to the negatives I have mentioned I won t be picking them up just yet I would Earthfall (Homecoming, recommend A Daddy for Christmas reading this book because of the great story line and well developed characters However I would like to see an edited version in the future

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review Obsessions 103 Alpha City series Book 1 A city run by shiftersIn Alpha city wolves bears tigers panthers and jaguars live together in peace centred and led by the Council of Alpha’s Ryder Malone is the Alpha of his werewolf pack He carefully balances his responsibilities as the official head of the Obsessions was actually a really awesome and uniue story I had a lot of fun reading it It s like one of those rare gems that once you find it you go all my precious on it I was delighted by the idea of a shifter only city and said city being run by several different types of shifters I thought the mixture of different types of shifters all living together was a cool and cohesive idea normally there all kept apart The story mainly revolves around best friends London and Zoey and of course Zoey s big brother Ryder I enjoyed the changing points of view and then a couple full pages detailing Ryder and Londons perspective Zoey and London are wonderfully written I can actually picture them as people which rarely happens with PNR stories Both these women represented their age brackets well London personified the tougher type of gal while Zoey was softer and needed of a helping hand Ryder both intrigued and annoyed me The supporting characters were all well fleshed out I could easily see how this group works Now for the bad guys they were just totally hate able When I read about them I honestly thought it was a mash up of Cruella de Vil married the Governor from the walking dead because it s a hubby and wife combo They were so two faced and evil ugh Perfect bad guys for this storyI d definitely recommend this book to shifter and paranormal lovers The story was well written it had an easy flow about it Nothing was really rushed relationship wise it slowly developed and then exploded I d definitely read from this authorI received this book in exchange for an honest review via LoP on goodreadscom Blackmailed By Daddy run by shiftersIn Alpha city wolves bears tigers panthers and jaguars live together in peace centred and led by the Council of Alpha’s Ryder Malone is the Alpha of his werewolf pack He carefully balances his उरलं सुरलं [Urla Surla] responsibilities as the official head of the Obsessions was actually a Cock Tales really awesome and uniue story I had a lot of fun Son of the Hero reading it It s like one of those The Alien Jigsaw rare gems that once you find it you go all my precious on it I was delighted by the idea of a shifter only city and said city being Towards a Comprehensive Theory of Human Learning run by several different types of shifters I thought the mixture of different types of shifters all living together was a cool and cohesive idea normally there all kept apart The story mainly The Illusion of Gods Presence revolves around best friends London and Zoey and of course Zoey s big brother Ryder I enjoyed the changing points of view and then a couple full pages detailing Ryder and Londons perspective Zoey and London are wonderfully written I can actually picture them as people which Folk Tales From The Soviet Union rarely happens with PNR stories Both these women Not The Hot Chick represented their age brackets well London personified the tougher type of gal while Zoey was softer and needed of a helping hand Ryder both intrigued and annoyed me The supporting characters were all well fleshed out I could easily see how this group works Now for the bad guys they were just totally hate able When I Pegged and Plugged at the Club read about them I honestly thought it was a mash up of Cruella de Vil married the Governor from the walking dead because it s a hubby and wife combo They were so two faced and evil ugh Perfect bad guys for this storyI d definitely Tunnel Through Time recommend this book to shifter and paranormal lovers The story was well written it had an easy flow about it Nothing was Game of Bimbofication, Part 3 really Game of Bimbofication, Part 2 rushed Sermons Preached Upon Several Occasions, Vol. 1 of 5 relationship wise it slowly developed and then exploded I d definitely The Fatima Century read from this authorI Leah Starrs Revenge received this book in exchange for an honest Pieces 8 (Pieces, review via LoP on goodreadscom

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review Obsessions 103 Council and older brother to his sister Zoey but when she decides to leave for college he finds himself drawn to her roommate Like an obsession London Grey is under Ryder’s skin To his shock the young witch orphan and her best friend decide to move back to Alpha City with Zoey to cr Bryce EvansI received this book in exchange for an honest review LoP How desperate can you get London it s just a smile yeah it s a panty dropping smile 4 stars Obsessions is the first book of the Alpha City series First thing I have to say about this book is Have you seen the cover Wow Moving on We are introduced to Alpha City A City where shape shifters of many kinds and supernatural beings co exist in peace Where it is safe and protected from the outside world From the first chapter we are introduced to London and Zoey and how their friendship began London Grey is a toughstrong willed woman who is shy and keeps to herself On her first day at Milton College she meets Zoey Malone Zoey is the complete opposite of London She is open and softbut also not so toughEven with their differences they instantly become friends Their bond grew strong secrets were told and a new world was unraveled for London Pack Alpha Ryder tries to resist the desire he has for his little sister s roommate and best friend London Nothing goes to plan as the girls decide to open a business together in Alpha City Ryder believes a relationship with a human to be impossiblewhat if London isn t a human after all With so many dangers lurking around every corner can London survive in Alpha City Today right now I m telling you London Grey that I love you and you are my mate I will do whatever I have to do to make you mineThis story is brilliant It took the right amount of time to develop I loved the fact that this was a city run by shifters Also that all different kinds of shifters were able to co exist At first when I read the blurb I wasn t too sure how Bryce Evans could ve pulled that off But it did it actually worked The story itself came to life with all it s characters both good and evil I also loved how London and Ryder s relationship wasn t rushed The attraction was instantaneous but they had to work for their relationship It was a push pull situation filled with desire and jealousy It was such a pleasant ride Once London and Ryder finally got together I had the biggest smile on my face That s what this book does it pulls you in you feel what the characters are going through II thought I could live without you alone Immerse myself in my work but I can t London My life isn t complete if your not in it and I don t want to live any without youThe only reason I am not giving this book five stars is due to a lot of grammatical errors and misplaced misspelled words However I am most definitely looking forward to the next book in this seriesThe story line has me hooked I am also hoping to see of Zoey and Kayden and see how their relationship progresses And of course much of London and Ryder This is a must read to shape shifter paranormal romance fans It s is a captivatinguniue story which is worth the attention

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  • Obsessions
  • Bryce Evans
  • English
  • 15 March 2017
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